Welcome to my nightmare!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Just macabre fun.

The state of mind
had no counties
just the resident locals,
the angel and the devil
holding the sign
" Come inside."

© 2017 andrew mitchell

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Annette Pisano-Higley

I know that nightmare-ha! Great poem- every line so adroit and great play on words, metaphor use. You nailed it!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

haha Thank you Annette for reviewing my scribbles.:)

ms. barrie

this is simply amazing, Andrew! one fighting its desires versus walking down the path...[ of] with what i agree with Coyote Wolf, logic. this is another one of my favorites from you
thank you for sharing-- xx --
barrie

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you ms. barrie for your kind words and stopping by to comment on my scribbles.:)

Coyote Poetry

I agree. I liked the logic and the truth in your words. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank you John and for having the time to stop by and read my scribbles.

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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Added on August 5, 2017
Last Updated on August 5, 2017

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andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..