The dangling conversation

The dangling conversation
went like this
I lost my thoughts
and you caught them.
While in speaking of things
that matter I gathered
all your loose ends
a patchwork of our lives.
However, the last conversation
had me dangling on your words
until you cut your line.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

all the little unsaid grievances .... maybe it was kinder in the end to cut the line ?

[andrew mitchell]

I think you are right Stella.