Lone Spark in The Darkness

Lone Spark in The Darkness

A Poem by Amanda J. S.

This poem is based on a kid I know.


He’s sitting in the dark.

Inside of him there is a spark.

A spark of goodness,

Wanting to defeat the darkness.

He cries silent tears,

Not wanting anyone to notice the smears.

Lone spark in the darkness.


He is going day by day,

Thinking the way they treat him is okay.

He thinks it’s his fault,

Not taking it as an assault.

Too shy for seeking goodness,

Thinking he is oh so worthless.

Lone spark in darkness.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.

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I do believe I know a kid just like that...It is all a part of growing up I suppose, thinking that it is all your fault when things go wrong...I actually never did grow up..I just grew old....Great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :-)
Penned so beautifully, i love it great job. You are a very talented writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Amanda J. S.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on August 22, 2012
Last Updated on August 22, 2012
Tags: Sad, lone, spark, in, the, darkness, alone, insecure, evil


Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark

Hello, lovely people of Wristerscafe.org! I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Denmark, and my name is Amanda :-) I began writing about one and a half year ago, and a day hasn't gone by without me .. more..

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