I once knew a girl...

I once knew a girl...

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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She always had a wide smirk planted on her beautiful face

Was always welcoming

Always radiating glee.

But her soul wasn't alight with that same happiness.

I could clearly spot that torment,

Behind those big blue eyes of hers.


She was wearing a mask every day, 

I think.

Wouldn’t want people to feel sorry for her,

To think that she was weak.


But her real problem was,

I think,

That she was hiding it,

The sorrow,

The depression.

Because people thought that she was alright.

People thought that she was truly…

Happy.


Only I saw that she wasn’t

And I alone 

Couldn't save her.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


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Amanda J. S.
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Yeah........it's Life Style.So,Sometime i think it deeply...

Posted 11 Years Ago


very sad and deep ....good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

11 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^

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Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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Hello, lovely people of Wristerscafe.org! I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Denmark, and my name is Amanda :-) I began writing about one and a half year ago, and a day hasn't gone by without me .. more..

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