Another Second!

Got a bit late in greeting you guys.! :)

Another one failed the test,

Another reason there is to think

Another year is at rest,

Another life is down in sink,

Another life giving a wink,            

Another wish will I give,

Another “thank you” you will give,

Another thought yet there is to see,

Another we have a second rusted si?

Another precious moment gone,

Another day to be born,

Another day to say sorry,

Another day is to stare!   

Another “Another” is always there!

 

                                        -------------- Amar laksh

 

Author's Note

Silly one guys. :)

Reviews

[Pragya Saxena]

Craziness brought out! well this one surely hold the truth! :)

[Stanley Wilson]

fun and light poem

[amarlaksh]

yeah i guess :P

[Salar Majak]

no no no this one isn't silly it's really deap, never think i'ts silly ok? this is the interpretation of the thoughts, the crazy thoughts, you know what i mean ;)

[william keepers]

Silly on the surface perhaps, yet there is quite a bit of depth here. It speaks of the perpetual mundane curtisies and the trivial monotony of daily life. Scary if you ask me!

[Tarry Franck]

Fun to read - I enjoyed it :)

[Ohhhwillow]

Light but still opens up thought, I like it. :)

[Blue Ivory]

It's a hopeful write. It's good to see something positive once in a while.

[Writer *78*]

sync i think or down the sink. always good to think of the future. great work

[DrD]

Silly but fun to read. Thanks for this one.

[Tex]

not so silly... I like how it moves from past disappointments to positive thinking about the future.