Every Detail

Every Detail

A Poem by Amber Dawn Agin
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I've gone over everything in my head a thousand times over

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I've played over every detail:
every moment, good or bad
every memory
every "I love you"
every promise
every kiss
every fight
every problem
everything I never got to tell you
every hurtful word I too easily let spill
everything I did wrong
everything I did right

I've gone through it
over and over and over
racking my brain to find the answers
that you never gave to me
to find the meaning
that I'm sure isn't there
to find the closure
I know I'll never have

I've thought about every single detail
while you have erased me from your life
from your memories
and from your heart

© 2016 Amber Dawn Agin


Author's Note

Amber Dawn Agin
Another poem to vent. Criticism and reviews are always welcome.

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It is so sad when a relation or friendship comes to an end. We keep on thinking why but fail to find any answer.
Very nicely penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Amber Dawn Agin

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!~ xx
Brilliantly crafted, with stunning imagery, language and cadence.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Amber Dawn Agin

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review! xx
Losing the people you love is so hard... Thank you for sharing your feelings... beautiful poem.
Lots of love,
Shy_muse

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Amber Dawn Agin

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review x

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Added on May 16, 2016
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Tags: heartbreak, breakups, broken hearts, can't stop thinking, he moved on, pain, hurting

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Amber Dawn Agin
Amber Dawn Agin

Harrisburg, IL



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Just your typical 19 year old girl that's kinda messed up in the head and thinks she can be poetic *shrugs* more..

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