Come up with a title later

She loved a boy

Who hates her

She kissed a boy

Who doesn't want her

She wanted a boy

Who didn't know a thing

She hates the lone boy

Who just doesn't seem to know it yet

Reviews

[Emily]

I think I would title this something like Past and Present, or Before and After.

I like this piece because of its simplicity. I do have one issue though, and that is that the tense changes,
Loved - past
hates - present
These two don't agree and it makes the two sentences awkward

Doesn't - present
wanted - past
again, they don't agree, and in fact they don't agree with the past and present issues in the first. If you want to switch tense, keep she in past and who in present or vice versa, but the constant switching makes this piece confusing.

wanted - past
didn't - past
those two agree and are the two sentences which flow the best

I love the idea behind this piece, and with a little bit of work this can just blow people away.