The Joker's Promise

The Joker's Promise

A Poem by ambur
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 Everything falls apart, and there is silence where the whispers were once held. The sky is no longer painted blue, and the grass is as dead as the lies left behind. Tomorrow could be what ever you make it as long as it has a terrible ending. The light seems too far away for effort, and the tasks ahead are dreadful. Maybe by November the Joker's promise will be a premade happy fortune of real time saying sorry[s] and walking away[s]...

© 2011 ambur


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For me this is highly atmospheric.
However I have to remove those (s)'s from it to enjoy it.

A personal thing and not a criticism, you keep them, I'll eat them.

Regards Skin

Posted 13 Years Ago



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