the joyous ache of you

the joyous ache of you

A Poem by Lyn Anderson
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Inspired by comments on my recent works

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someone once told me


that love can be a joyous ache -


that's something I never knew


until I met you.


but that's not all love does -


it lives and jumps and breathes


and stutters, stumbles, shakes


and quivers - it fills me, and spills


out onto the floor, it shivers


and pops, and crackles for more ...


On occasion, it sings in the shower.


and yes, for you


It aches ...


© 2020 Lyn Anderson


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Love sings in the shower this is so true

Posted 1 Month Ago


Yum:) enjoy those aches Lynne
pain pain pane... pleasure
and then
what a treasure:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping in
love that quiver and shaken and singing in the shower kind of love Lyn and to find it is just, just something else!!! your pen is alive and the paper just "sings" when it puts words on it....

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Months Ago

Thanks so much
OMG...your words were written for this video, and the video was made JUST for Your Words. What a powerful love story!!! Yes, and the ACHE is real! Love your words, Lyn.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Months Ago

I love it when I rate an OMG
Ralph Proenza (Docralph)

5 Months Ago

❤️ I’m a slobbering romantic and this is how I missed my wife during boot camp! ...so you dese.. read more

Perfectly poemed and oh' how bloomin true you are ma'am....

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Months Ago

Thanks. You were (are) inspirational. :)
Love is all you have said and more. That ache you have inside when you are away from the one you love, tells you how much they mean to you and how much you miss their company. Yes, I can understand that and singing in the shower too. Good to read you again Lyn.

Chris

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time
a very welcome ache indeed...and if we take the good with the bad, the downs with the ups...
then we are really in love and really committed to a feeling that can last forever and a day.
quite the romantic write here.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping in again

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Added on January 14, 2020
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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