plight

since i was away from home for a long time , i used to chat with a girl of my hood whom i feel for. just a description of a bit of story in poetic flow .

keep the change, appreciation 

ain`t no need to wink.

Just pass the smile 

for the heart in the puddle ,

wanna sink.

Cant express, she way beyond 

if i tried , i be making fool of my own.

Her smile worthy to be clown.

Few words more expressions

cell phone pinged , a sweet temptation.

My reply , she bust a laughter

if i could see there after .

I SEE HER LESS I FEAR MORE 

SHE BOTHERS LESS, I BEAR MORE.

Those shades designer? 

They hiding stupid face , a clear moon.

She said to me `i talk seldom`

i have seen her ways ,

who talk to strangers 

roaming random making friends.

Its just a race

keep running if you are happy 

but i`l be still at this place.

Reviews

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

I can see you hip hop come out in this haha- no but really it had nice rhythm to it, like a song. Good job

[amrit]

haha ! thanx for feeling the same way as i feel about this ! :)