CoFFEE

Attempting to re-construct this one. Can anyone help...?

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Every sip keeps me distracted from life's troubles

Everyone and everything may come and go quickly but addiction hangs around faithfully

 

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

Since you asked for idea's here are some thoughts for your acrostic. After reading your other work I thought of these emotions. I'm sure when you are ready you will find the words you need to finish this piece of work that has great potential. ~ Jude :-)


Can I ever find a way to let go of what was
Of this seemingly realistic infatuation
Freedom from this ache I genuinely need myself to allow
Faithfully I grasp my only warmth, as I dream of autonomy knowing�

Every sip keeps me distracted from life's troubles
Everyone and everything may come and go quickly but addiction hangs around faithfully

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I LOVE COFFEE, and I can't simply without a cup of coffee daily!
It also reminds me of your previous Display name, which I loved a lot....

This must be an acrostic but unfortunately due to that crash of writings in cafe, it got lost.. (I guess)
And I will surely try to reconstruct it whenever I will write something :)

[V. K. Harris]

I remember this one, but in total I know it was grand.:)

[Rain]

I hope you find the rest..looks good. Rain..

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

I couldn't wait to open this up and see what was written. I enjoyed it...Very different and entertaining.

[Emily B]

I love this! I can so understand that strange fascination with the brown stuff.

[Serendipity]

I understand your love. I have become an addict myself. I would say for the last 4 years. The craving, the desire, the need it is indescribable. And the fulfillment and the high, can never be compared.

[James Mayfield]

Well you can't have coffee without caffeine! I think this was kind of funny. I don't like doing acrostics because I always run out of lines.

[Dorothy]

Very cute and nice! I'm not a big coffee drinker so I can't totally relate, but it does seem that coffee is there in the good and bad! :)

[[Starshine] Faerie]

I can more than relate to this poem, enjoying coffee the way I do. I love that line "every sip keeps me distracted from life's troubles". Maybe because I just know from my own experience that this holds true for me. If I'm having troubles weighing down on me, I can just sit down at a sidewalk caf�, or at home in a big arm chair, hug my coffee cup, and with each sip, the troubles seem farther and farther away.

Great, great, great poem! I really like it! It's the sort of thing I would frame above my desk as I sit in my cubicle worrying over an article deadline. =]]