Castigation

Sometimes, there are no answers...

 

 

 

 

Can I ever find peace in this chaos

Again; yet again I have hurt myself

Society’s hypocrisies confuse me further

The same cluelessness persists and

I am a misfit in the silent confusion

Going around in circles that have no end

Almost always I run into an obstacle

Turning back, re-routing to find another way

I feel lost in this maze of life

Often asking myself what went wrong but I find

No answers, only more questions

 

Author's Note

Re-constructed from memory.

Reviews

[LadyLove]

The trick is sometimes to never turn back to where the confusion started...sometimes. Depends on whether that place already has a confusion answered. Begin from the place that came after...and let each one stay a place never gone back to again if it was not where you liked the first time. The road ahead is cleaner most times and more sure from the things you have managed to learn. You show your confusion well...how it seems you are running in circles that lead to nothing but the same as you already have felt. But maybe some things don't need an answer for you to go forward anyway; walk away from them and closer to a happier path. You did this nicely. Take care!

[Ladysue]

Very good piece. I, too, love the last line. I also like this line,
I am a misfit in the silent confusion
Going around in circles that have no end
Excellent write.

[Ivory]

Powerful and haunting piece.
Give a sense of depression and fear.
Very creative write ; )

[Jessica]

Truly how life is.. Well done.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A nice acrostic - A wonderful piece you have written here.....I love the last line - No answers, only more questions.

Wonderful! :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

nice

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I absolutely adore this acrostic, and the last line is marvelous... like a punchline almost. I'm glad you entered my conest, even though you made the judging just that much tougher! lol. Great work, as I have seen always from you, so far. lol.
KH

[Michael Lopez]

this a very good read
i think this is the smartest i've read today...
oh and i love coffee the darker the better
keep it up...