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A Poem by anais.vionet
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I've invented the pattern poem - please FedEx the Pulitzer - I can't go OUT =[

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arrgh!. Zoom didn’t connect? - more tech issues
USPS can’t deliver any more - Trump's America!
I wasn’t dragged & dropped - is wireless down?
no Facebook notifications? - ok, who uses that
My image wasn’t swiped! - I knew my hair was..
My email was returned? - call that Alphabet guy
No Amazon deliveries. - a probable traffic issue
FedEx hasn’t arrived! - there must be a mistake
I didn’t get pinned? - maybe there’s a pandemic
I wasn’t upvoted. - I question the entire process
No iMessages - maybe the upgrade was buggy
No likes? - is it me or is it possible a pattern has

© 2020 anais.vionet


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anais.vionet
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This is very refreshing experiment to me. Each line break up to another line. Like thoughts when they changing directions. It's like collection of our daily reality at deconstructed mosaic of our minds. Actually lines are very realistic but when you blend them together . It's sounds very fantastic and dreamy. I really like it.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2020
Last Updated on June 13, 2020
Tags: social media, teen, humor, poetic innovation

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