blind mass cult think cult mass blind think

blind mass cult think cult mass blind think

A Poem by brock
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just a poem i wrote when i was up late on night tell me what you think

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Cult think

Blind mass

Cult think

Blind mass

Corruption rapes

Sex draws all

Dooms days here

You’re all queer

Zero point nears

Corruption rules

Truth blind

Masses seek

But fail to conformity

The cage lingers about the free

Anarchy should if not be the king

Such blasphemy not to conform

Fucked up standards

No freedom to be had today

Only what others throats speak

Seek what binds

Find truth in lies

Remember media is money

So government

Don’t play fool

In tragic circumstance

Salt burns

Wounds mend

The fire runs

Bloods not pure

Brother Sister

Incestide be king

Waves of death to those who

Oppose don’t live by the w***e

Laws are for w****s

© 2009 brock


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It'd make some good thrash. I'd listen to that. I'd sing it too. Sing it loud and sing it proud.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this feels more like a list of possible lyrics to a homophobic, teenage thrash band.
Not sure if that was what you were going for, but if so, well writtn

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting poem... I like it! It was very well written, greatly detailed, and very descriptive! It was amazing! It was so emotional, and held a lot of meaning! Fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good job

keep it up :D:D

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ok...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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brock

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hi im Brock im usually really shy but i find my true voice in writing my poems aren't always so straight froward they have hidden meanings if your willing to look or just ask if u want ill add an.. more..

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