Kingdom of Desire

Kingdom of Desire

A Poem by Angel Bella

Being a lost soul

In the bleak desert

looking for water and seeking thirst

Here I come to save you

Here I come to breath your spirit into me

Just so one day

We can hold our hearts

And sway

In the garden of heaven

In the everlasting bliss

© 2013 Angel Bella


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It's a great Rhyming poem. Liked this piece and enjoyed this too much. I wanted to read more on it.... i want to see what happen further more... if i'd a suggestion then i'd say, keep write more on it. Continue it. Very bright pic. you've shown me by your few words. You've shown me the Reality... of everyone's heart.
The ending's awesome and damn nicely ended with your nice words. Keep posting more stuffs.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Welcome anytime. And thank you for your time.



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My Dear Writing Friend,
I liked the write, I mused it before my fire. I never had thought of heaven being a garden before, I’ve always thought it as a wonderful snow covered tundra. You cause me to wonder, well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind comment!
Nicely penned, font's clear too to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Thank You.
Beautifull written my friend. Would love to read more of your works. Keep up the good work.
Leo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Thanks and Welcome.
lovely arrangement. reminds me of a quote>>> " beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing there is a field; i will wait for you there."

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment and welcome.
It's a great Rhyming poem. Liked this piece and enjoyed this too much. I wanted to read more on it.... i want to see what happen further more... if i'd a suggestion then i'd say, keep write more on it. Continue it. Very bright pic. you've shown me by your few words. You've shown me the Reality... of everyone's heart.
The ending's awesome and damn nicely ended with your nice words. Keep posting more stuffs.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Bella

10 Years Ago

Welcome anytime. And thank you for your time.

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