Wooden Swing

Wooden Swing

A Poem by Starrbitt

red koolade stains
our scribbled names
cover the wooden swing

her tiny purrs
our laughter
pushes the wooden swing

dragonflie smiles
fireflie tiles
surround the wooden swing

lilys in bloom
heart clouds at noon
watch over the wooden swing

birds chirping low
the stream at flow
all speak to the wooden swing

the sharpened saw
cut the tree raw
daddy ruined the wooden swing

my childhood, gone
out my front lawn
i miss my old wooden swing

© 2012 Starrbitt


Author's Note

Starrbitt
I've added some old ones from when i had Writers-network...hope u like them

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A strong sense of sorrow.....Well written.....Whisk

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg it describes a lot of my child hood and it may be sad but i love it good job!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


that's really good. nice job. check out mine?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem. I like the good memories. I had four children. Many wood swings were broken. I like the way you described the story and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

94 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 2, 2012
Last Updated on May 11, 2012

Author

Starrbitt
Starrbitt

Oakhill, WV



About
I love anime if you couldn't tell, vampires, writing, and evil faeries! My favorite color is purple, I like to read about creatures and zombies, and I love making my own videos. more..

Writing
Prologue Prologue

A Chapter by Starrbitt


Chapter One Chapter One

A Chapter by Starrbitt


Chapter Two Chapter Two

A Chapter by Starrbitt



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


You You

A Poem by LittleLover


IMPORTANT! IMPORTANT!

A Poem by CC Faye