An Aquarian's Dream 2

2023

I sailed on a Sea of Stars across the night,

on looking at the marvelous sight,

as I did I pondered what the future may hold. 

May it be beautiful,

may it be troublesome,

of that I am not sure,

but I know this,

I am better than I was before,

and for that I am grateful.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

An insightful dream….knowing what your past life was and wondering where your path will take you….as you “sail on the sea of stars…..you’re not sure of you future, but realize it will be better than before…..you realize that life can be troublesome, but in your dream your life has improved….
Very lovely scene and dream
Best, B

[light and ashes]

Thank you.

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome!
Best, B

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I’m an Aquarian but don’t follow it
I loved your poem life’s a struggle
But you put it perfectly at end especially
And loved the reference to night scene in beginning

[light and ashes]

Thank you, it follows the same theme as the first one.....
An Aquarian's Dream..I think you should go read it, especially if you are an Aquarius also.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks I’ll look 👀

[Lydia Shutter]

To be a better person every day is a goal that is often difficult to reach, but your words make it sound so easy. A magical celestial beauty of a poem. Lydi**

[light and ashes]

I assure you Lydia, it has been anything but easy.
Maybe sometimes that is the only way we can truly change.

[willweb]

Such a positive and uplifting poem that will cause anyone who reads it to smile. I loved this, everything about it. Really nicely crafted my friend.