I heard you

I heard you last night. You whispered " I'm sorry".
You thought I was sleeping, while I was silently weeping.
You traced my face, my heart began to race.
You started to tell of the day we first met, how you knew
my heart you had to get.
You remembered the first kiss, a memory I couldn't miss.
How my lips trembled at your touch, you remembered it at such.
You talked about our wedding day, how beautiful I looked.
Something you said your breath it took.
That night would be my first. You a man full of hunger and thirst.
You tried to be gentle, to give me some time.
For the culmination of that moment would be sublime.
You remember me happy and full of joy. You promised to love me
and never me toy.
I heard you say " I'm sorry" for having lied. For hurting me deeply
although you never tried.
That spark and life in me now gone, your coldness and distance
had all this done.
And as I hear you say it all, I wonder how it came to be,
That all this hurt and pain I feel, you never seemed to see.
I heard you say " I'm sorry" and your tears touched my face.
As always my silent tears, falling into empty space.

Reviews

[Angie G]

Ty Amos.. I constantly find myself lookin back at my life and then without realizing it, I start writing.. lol nuts I know.. Ty my friend

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[A. Amos]

My friend you pour heart and soul in this one, poignant yet marvelous write. Surely many will feel related with your work, thanks for sharing

[Angie G]

Ty Jess!! And yeah, I've been through some rough stuff but, I always get back up n live again!!!..

[Jess.]

This moved me so much. Such a hopeless time when this happens to a person, it can completely shut them down when someone they love lies and hurts them. Brought back feelings and memories of my own. I love it.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)....................