All I want

All I want

A Poem by Angie G
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Women are a rare, special kinda creature. We are hard to understand.

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My thoughts come with an avalanche of emotions.
I don't want to feel them, sense them, taste them!!

I want nothing more but peace!!

I can't rid my heart from its internal war.
But I don't want to feel it beating, neither fast nor slow!!

I don't want to feel it at all!!

All I want is the comfort of sadness, the silence of loneliness and the hug of darkness!!

I want an infinite oblivion!!

And suddenly you come in and all I want is you!!

© 2017 Angie G


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I liked this poem. I felt the turmoil to escape and I liked the ending. Foolish heart , always overtake the mind's logic. Thank you Angie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

I thank you for your kind comment my friend. Happy writing!!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Angie.
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Dj
Always so passionate. You really know how to capture the moment. I get it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read my work. All I write has a meaning and a feeling behind it. Th.. read more
This is my favourite of your thus far. It reads very well, has a dramatic and sinister overtone brushed aside in the final line!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

Ha!! Thank you my friend!!! Happy writing!
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Gee
Oh to understand women. I'm well practised in the art of walking on eggshells as I live with 3 women.
Well done that laydeeeeee

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

Lol thank you for your kind review and good luck to ya!.. Happy writing!
Oh I can so relate to your poem...it's beautifully done... :)
We really are hard to decode ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Angie G

6 Years Ago

We are! And it takes a special man to try.. Lol.. Ty Hun! Happy writing!

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