You could have...

You could have...

A Poem by Angie G
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When you deserve a goodbye..

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You could have said goodbye.
Smiled at me for one last time.
Held me only for a second.

You could have given me a reason.
I wasn't what you expected.
Needed more than I could give.

You could have kissed me softly.
Made love to me as a parting gift.
Taken me on one last ride.

You could have looked me in the eyes.
But you left without a word.
Now I'm left with nothing but a question.

Why didn't you?.....

© 2017 Angie G


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sometimes it`s hard to say good bye,sometimes people don`t know what they are leaving behind
till it`s to late

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

True my friend.. Thank you. Happy writing!
 wordman

6 Years Ago

my pleasure
I like the way this one builds up with statements and then closes with a final question, which is the crux of the poem. In three words we feel all of the speaker's pain. Well done,

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie G

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review.

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A hopeless romantic. A dreamer of impossibilities. My writing may not make sense.. But I don't make sense. And when my heart takes over my brain shuts down. I live the moment, cherish the memories and.. more..

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