An ode to her

In the echoes 

of her silvery chiseled anklets

I heard the sweet silence

speak a thousand words. 

In the deep red glow

of her little velvety cupped lips

I knelt down to take a dip

in its sea of undying shyness.

In the arresting stings

of her flaming golden eyes 

I saw the heavens rise

in frenzy flares to touch her feet.

In the shivering chills

of her mellowing creamy skin

I sensed the jarring heaviness

take me over unto a bliss.

- AH, 11/06/2007

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a leaping departure from the usual romantic rubbish I hate in so many boring love poems (a very good thing!) You describe lips & eyes, as many romantic poems do, but your description is so fresh & unusual, this is what I crave when I read the more mundane lumps of love talk going around. I don't think I've ever had this much fun reading a love poem until just now! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[A.H.]

I'm glad you found it fun reading this love poem and happy to know it didn't bore you. Thank you Margie for the comments and your thoughts on this one. Best, Abhilash

[horizon]

Silence Speaks a thousand words..undying shyness asset of a girl...you've depicted such a beauty in just two lines I am mesmerised by the lines...liked it very much...:))

[A.H.]

Thanks for the really kind words. Beauty sometimes is so striking that you can't help but notice and appreciate it :) I'm happy to hear you liked it, horizon!

[horizon]

It has touched my heart for sure

[A.H.]

ah! very glad to hear that... horizon! thanks for sharing this!