the last kiss

 I was with her

when the time was about to separate us

when the world was against us

when the mountain was burdening us

I was having my hand around her

when the river of emotion was flowing inside us  

when the sun rays was burning us

and when the coldness of night freezing us

I was looking into the eyes of her

when the volcano of hopes were bursting near us

when the leaves of the trees were flying around us

when the deep blue sky was getting closer to us

I was kissing last time her

when the death was about to torn apart us 

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Very respectful way of describing the last days of the person you cared about.

[Shanil Mehdi]

I liked the metaphors in this, quite interesting.