A Victim Of Questionable Style

Thongs and low-rise jeans are exposing much more than they should.

 

We all stared at her dimples,

As she bent to tie her shoe,

Her cheeks peeped over her low-rise jeans,

And her thong was showing too.

 

It used to be that dimples,

Were viewed upon the face,

A charming enhancement to a smile,

Never out of place.

 

The young girl didn’t seem to mind,

That her backside was all but bare,

Yet she had the nerve to get upset,

When she saw the way we stared.

 

A little old lady spoke up first,

“Your dimples are showing my dear,

Perhaps your dryer is running too hot,

Your jeans have shrunk I fear.”

 

The girl stalked away indignantly,

And I couldn’t help but smile,

Unfortunately the young girl was,

A victim of questionable style.

 

- Annabel Sheila

Reviews

[shythatway]

Ahh. I chose this one first because of the title. Not what I expected at all. *grins* What a lovely sense of humour, and you're making a very good point. I really do not see how this style could get so popular. I mean, it's nothing new. Plumbers have done this since the beginning of time.

[Jason]

Haha Awsome piece. This is really funny and well written.


"A little old lady spoke up first,
"Your dimples are showing my dear,
Perhaps your dryer is running too hot,
Your jeans have shrunk I fear." "

Thanks

[Suzanne Sherif]

This is too funny, and very true too life! Too often young girls wear somewhat inappropriate attention-grabbing things, and then react strangely when they do get attention! I think I want to print this one and save it to show to my daughter when she gets to be that age. Good one!

[Chemistry]

I love this poem - Bravo
It had a nice british since of humor.
I will look forward to reading more of your lyrical poetry.
Carry on.

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

Haha. This poem made me smile. :] It had a nice flow and had humor, very nice write.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This well written bit of lyrical friend goes to make a point that I have always held to be true. Style is in the eye of the beholder. Some of us consider this to be the height of style. But then again, consider the source ... a Creepy Piggish Guy.

[Rockebah]

This is really funny. I love it. It is well written and catchy. Keep it up

[Erin Was Here.]

I love this poem!
It is so well-written and flows beautifully. But the best part about it is the humor you put into it. I loved your point of view, and the quote from the little old lady. There needed to be a poem written about this. I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to tie some girl's pants to her neck so they wouldn't slide down like that. ;)
Awesome poem!

[Chris1189]

hahaha, very funny, because it's so true. well done.