Self Liberation

Self Liberation

A Poem by Anna

       I climb

         through

  the layers

     of illusioned

        clarity

to open

   the skylight

       and let

         the smoke

            out.

© 2008 Anna


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This is very confident!
I'm trying to work out if the stairs rising to the left has any significance...
I feel as though I'm descending here...
you know I think this would work well as an upside down piece:
....
--------the layers
----through
I climb

see where I'm coming from?
nice to see graphics and words working together here,
thank you!
doh - the spaces be gone - I'll add dashes...


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i get confusion......i love it

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just "cleanse the doors of perception," said Aldous Huxley. I admire the breathless simplicity of this poem which is something I try for a lot.

Joy to read your work, Anna.

Thanks,
Tom

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very confident!
I'm trying to work out if the stairs rising to the left has any significance...
I feel as though I'm descending here...
you know I think this would work well as an upside down piece:
....
--------the layers
----through
I climb

see where I'm coming from?
nice to see graphics and words working together here,
thank you!
doh - the spaces be gone - I'll add dashes...


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

the format reminds me of stairs. nice job on that! we are often couldy in our own thoughts but when we open up and let the haze leave we can see clearly. I like this poem :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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