Perceptibility

I sifted through

the grains

of sand

searching for

some

buried

elementariness

beneath this all.

but...

the simplicity

was already

in the very

sand

I had scattered.

Reviews

[Art]

nice work...a bit of philosophical searching can be sensed through the sifting through of your poem...nice...

[Jinx's Heart]

Truly beautiful and true. I envy your talent in your deliverance of words. You truly have mastered the spirit and soul of poetry. Completely elegant. :)