I think this worked brilliantly.......Thoughts going through either the mind of the person in the casket, or the one hearing any screams.......would mimic a rhythm, and quite frankly, when I read this out loud, it sounds like a beating heart - quite apt, for one about to die due to suffocation.
I was nine years old when my older brother told me stories of people buried alive hundreds of years ago, but they were not really dead, and then the casket bumping against the bottom of the grave gave their hearts a jolt and they started breathing.....only to discover their horrible fate.......I labelled those nightmares, "The casket chronicles".......0:
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
SV I wrote this after reading of a teen girl who came round after being put in her tomb in a mausole.. read moreSV I wrote this after reading of a teen girl who came round after being put in her tomb in a mausoleum - her family videoed themselves smashing open the tomb (alabaster or thin marble, I think). I remember seeing a program which said bells were attached to some graves so the occupant could ring if they came to. - the stuff of nightmares...
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works well for me! i read somewhere some when that in the old days people were buried with a line from inside the casket to the surface and tied to a bent rod with a bell on the end ... just in case ;)
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Probably the most horrific thing imaginable. I heard at one point in the 19th century they actually had bells attached to caskets that ran up to the surface. I love the layout. This gave me a shudder.
Aloha Alisa - thank you very much for your kind words. Always a pleasure to see you. Im fine thanks... read moreAloha Alisa - thank you very much for your kind words. Always a pleasure to see you. Im fine thanks. How are you? :)
8 Years Ago
Hello my friend from across land and sea...
I have been better, but thank you for ask.. read moreHello my friend from across land and sea...
I have been better, but thank you for asking. I am recovering from the loss of two friends recently, one in August, the other in December...
Death is always unexpected, especially when it comes suddenly...
Looking forward to reading more of your work along with your thoughts on some of mine.