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fun write for Coffee Poetry competition

Aint no ' t' in coffee..............You couldn't have had.....The Boston Coffee Party.......Nor could you wear short sleeved coffee-shirts in summer.......And coming to a Coffee-junction is just plain daft - almost as as daft as  a rampaging Coffee-ranasuarus Rex........But when the sun has  peeked o'er the horizon and the morning paper's vellichor fills the air, there's no room for Tea ...then...only hot rich coffee will do.........That's c.o.f.f.e.e.   ~ aint no 't' in coffee yo !!gl

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Very well written! I love it! Good luck in the competition. :)

[:o]

lol green coffee would never go over well with coffee drinkers either. Fun poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You are having fun (with pun) in this one.
That was "cool" (yet coffee is hot!) 😁
Thanks for sharing this and for reading my piece, too.

[ExquisiteEyes]

Nice one! I like fun filled tune.

[TL Boehm]

.But when the sun has peeked o'er the horizon and the morning paper's vellichor fills the air, there's no room for Tea

ooh that is my favorite line right there!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those poor British...who would have to say..."would you like a spot of coffee?"
just doesn't sound the same.

this is really a smile....thanks for that this morning, ANTO...

j.

[Terpsichore]

A perfect percolation! :))


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[Einstein Noodle]

:)) love the rap element! i think now you must give equal time to "T" ;)

E.

[David Marsden]

We don't seem to get many comical poem on here. I like this one and I think comedy is the hardest thing to write but you did it justice. I like the style and the creativity in this, who could have thought of writing a poem about tea and coffee?

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Playful with the coffee--nice way to start the morning!
Coffee or tea?
Depends on my mood... or my tummy.
smell & taste always a factor.
:)