Addictions

My stomach was turning and I was starting to feel nauseous. You'd figure by now it would be something I was used to but apparently it wasn't. One . . . Two . . . Three . . . I kept counting but it was never enough. A new addiction I thought I'd never have, began to take control. Everything just seemed to remind me of it and I didn't even try to stop it. There was only a few reasons for quitting but more than enough reasons to keep going. Tears stream down my face and fall onto my legs. Was this really worth it? Of course it was. To me, it was. It truly was a reasonable thing to do to relieve stress. I'm starting to make a mess and I'm getting tired of cleaning up so I head to bed. "If only," I think and fall into sleep.

Author's Note

More to come, maybe?

Reviews

[Brittany]

I hope you decide to continue.

Constructively, I noticed a tense change from past to present with 'Tears stream.' You could also take out 'and' and restructure the sentences if you're so inclined.

I like the first person emotion and stream of conciousness.

[Apatheia]

Thank you very much. :)

[Criss ;)]

Hahah...well write, when i saw your tittle i was thinkin; that it was all about some pain n addicted fella....but it's totally out of my league...lol, it's lovely write how you play with the words here....very nice...

you know i think it's all about sleep...lol, sleep's onself an addiction...lol
well...you dropped here well piece to read, well expressed....but hey, don't you think that it' should b continue...????

i wanna read more because it's quite interestin' to read...hope you're gonna continue it.....

if i'd suggestion to give you then i wanna say "outstandn]in' write".....plz...continue it n notify me whereever you do continue it...:)
n from me for you 95.5/100 :)

have a nice writin'

[MisguidedGhost]

really good!

[Apatheia]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting intro. Sleep can be blocked out by a active mind. I hope to read more and see where you are taking this tale.
Coyote

[Apatheia]

Thank you. More will be up soon. :)

[Pól]

interesting- i want more

[Apatheia]

Thank you. They'll be more soon. :)

[Pól]

good

[Daliah Valley]

Ohmergersh..........wowww.........that is so emotional....and awesome.....stellar.

[Apatheia]

Thank you!

[KeithF'water]

Maybe you can expand on this, it intrigues.

[Apatheia]

Thank you! From everyone wanting more, I'll be sure to do it. :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

Oh gosh. I know exactly what this particular scene is like... Now you definitely have my attention and intrigue. Great write.

[Apatheia]

Thank you so much! I'm hoping to write more eventually.

[Celestial Witch Child]

I'd love to read it if you do.

[MachinaWriter]

Emotional, powerful. You have a lot of soul. Thank you for sharing this.

[Apatheia]

Thank you for reading. :)

[eatmills]

Addictions are very powerful. They take hold and are hard to shake off. I have one last addiction to kick before it takes the best of me. I like your write, very emotional, very raw.

When your maybe turns to yes let me know.

[Apatheia]

Thank you so much, I'll be sure to tell you.