God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Jaidyn DeVoir]

An absolutely gorgeous write.

With Love,

Jaidyn

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful~embracing and embracable gem of a poem~

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow wonderful write. I love this poem. Just great work!!! Very amazing.
~Bridget~

[Dorothy Wells]

That's beautiful! "And the meek shall inherit the earth." Precious little one, by the way:)

[Tariq]

makes me happy. Thanks a lot mr tate.

( i'm tarek from facebook, remember me?)

[Ellen Hammond]

Great meter and rhyme and a wonderful, inspiring message. I love the picture you chose too. It's just precious as is this poem. I love it!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i Read this poem a long time ago wander what happened to

my Review cause i remeber this poem very much so, Beautiful work like always.

God Bless lily

[Jazique]

You did good that was awesome and those few lines were so true

"You have but one fleeting chance
plant the seeds of love to grow
Create a life long everlasting
such as none could ever know"


May the future have these seeds of Love to grow.

[Charles]

This is a nice tight poem done with your usual attention to meter and rhyme. By my reckoning it is one of your best effort technically and the message isn't bad either. I think I'd look at the last stanza again were I you. The second line of the stanza needs some work - read it as a free-standing sentence and you'll see what I mean (upon which all life does seek). The last line would benefit from a comma after the 'you.' Really good work here, Tate.