God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

What an amazing responsibility God gives to parents! There are so many ways things could go wrong that it is a wonder so many kids turn out so well as they do. I am sure though that you are an awesome father =) Love the music, btw.. so fitting.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much

[Barbara Walker]

This brought a feeling of calm and peace, as i read it. Very nice!

[Tate Morgan]

thank you

[Rogue]

This comes across very heartfelt, Tate with beautiful sentiment.
Wonderful piece! :)

[Tate Morgan]

It was heartfelt Thanks

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful sentiment as always Tate. Outstanding

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Ric

[Silhouette]

Wow, what a fantastic poem. Incredibly beautiful and heartfelt...the image is adorable, by the way. Love it =)

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Tate doesnt like it afraid his girl might see it

[Silhouette]

You're welcome...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most inspiring piece that relates the edge that balances us all - well done, good read.

[Tate Morgan]

we all need balance dont we thank you

[TPK Stories]

May all you wish for come true! Awesome words! :-)

[Tate Morgan]

and yours as well thank you

[Dr. Wood ?]

your standard never drops tate..pretty damn good this

[Tate Morgan]

hi doc Your are too kind thank you

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific emotive and heart-tugging lines...

I love this poem :)

[Tate Morgan]

Hi soul How are you haven't spoken in a while thank you by the way

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I'm good thanks Tate, hope you are fine too :)

[Tate Morgan]

yeah it is graduation time formy brother in college and my niece as well I am happy its spring time and Im alive and well

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

nice to hear Tate, keep it real and take care always :)

[Tate Morgan]

Will do I hope this is a banner year for you . Something really great maybe

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I hope so too, but a calmer world I'd take anyday

[Tate Morgan]

me too me too

[Frieda P]

It's a moving poem, excellent. Bit cheeky to sell your wares on your poetry.

[Tate Morgan]

Cheeky what does that mean ?