My Dream

I'll tell you my dream come true. For all of us.

 

 

   I'll tell you my dream.  I want to be in love again. For that love to be my last. I wish to run home to her waiting arms every night make love to her till I can't breath.  Forsaking for her all others feel her sweat pour over me, like a waterfall.  To have the rains wash away my sins baptizing me in tears of joy.  Fall asleep to the beat of her heart, all the while her whispers caress my ears with "I love you". Play on the beach sharing our deepest fears and grandest joys. Wake not knowing where I end, nor where she begins. Drink of her love till I drown. Look at the moon each night I'm away, know she’s doing the same. Close my eyes, feel her heart touch my soul, and know she has shared with me something precious.  Walk hand in hand through the park at 85 stare into each others eyes not seeing the years gone by, but the priceless love within. I want to die in her loving embrace from a life well spent. All the while the lofting sounds of laughter, pour through my window, as grandchildren play hide and seek, in the fallen leaves of changing colors. To the sound of the lonesome whistle down the river the steamers would roll. I dream my last words to be “I love you". The last sounds I hear to be the new life crying down the hall belying echoes of the child that will take my place. A loving tear from my beloved wife and son, I'd pass from this world with a smile.

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Author's Note

It was this story that found my wife for me. For all who ever dared to dream of the great love in life. I thought of this dream and carried it with me all my life. I intend to live it and take it with me to the end. My great great grandfather immigrated to the United States years ago from Ireland. And though I never had the pleasure of knowing him. Be it enough for him to know I am thankful and happy. To him I say "thank you for my life". His spirit lives within my heart!

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

i can honestly say that i have never read anything quite as beautiful as this story. The love, the passion...it was all so heart warming that i found myself blushing while reading it. Your words paint a beautiful picture, Tate. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Ps- I'm extremely happy that your dream came true :) all the best to you and your loved ones

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I`m impressed from the depth of the emotions and the strong way it was created..all phrases are so touching! its really amazing, thank you for this, Tate!

[Archia]

This is a wonderful story.

[Mary Fioratti]

Really touching, Tate. I know what you mean about the great love in life. I have experienced this kind of love, for many.... many...... years. Very beautiful story, and very beautiful words.
*Mary*

[SM Davis]

Love barrier broken!!!!! Passionate...vulnerable...

Make love to her till I can't breath. Forsaking for her all others I'd feel her sweat pour over me, like a waterfall. To have those rains wash away my sins baptizing me in tears of joy. Fall asleep to the beat of her heart, all the while her whispers caress my ears with "I love you".

Well Done!!! You have indeed earned the daisies 100 full.

I love this Tate, you two are such a sparkling piece out of universe together.... I feel the roots, the longing the parts in between, perfectly penned! thanks for sharing...

~ your friend, Elisa Laura :)

[Audrey Howitt]

Tate, what a wonderful tribute to you and to the woman with whom you share your life. Beautifully done!

[LadyNaida]

Wow, this is so beautiful. Who doesn't dream like that about the one they love. Wow! I can feel the passion.

[Elemenopy]

This story gives the reader a lot of emotion. Every once in a while it is good to read a story about something nice. About life and love, dreams and aspirations, and that which we covet most. I do think that you were successful in hitting all of the emotions that you wished to convey, and in doing so wrote a peaceful prose that will make even the hardest souls smile.

I did not see anything wrong grammatically. The story flows well from start to finish. It is simple, to the point, and elegant. I dare say it is a poem in story form. Keep writing.

[Extant]

. . . Prose poetry it could be considered, I'd rather call it a descriptive essay because it's more than a story and more than poetry. Truly beautiful and if these words were so grand as to make your dream come true then this is proof that words can summon any dream and open any door.