Sunshine

Now my pains have no place to play And nothing left for them to do

Rebecca 

 

You consoled my worn soul

 lifting me to my feet

A noble heart of kindness

dealt Purgatory defeat

I found the nightmares fading

 as the new thoughts took their place

Washing out the poison 

that so long had filled that space

 

That smile faded my sadness

 with sweet thoughts I had of you

As pains found no place to play

and nothing for them to do

 

Author's Note

Her spark for life lit the fire in my mind.

Reviews

[Gary McDonald]

So tender and affectionate, full of the love that repairs, heals us, allowing us that new chance at a love once thought impossible. Favourite lines for me,

"The bright spring morning sunrise
from pains lost sorrows helped me cope"

For me, it just summed up the piece, exquisite writing!

[Jordan]

Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so sweet and beautiful! I love it! One of your best works yet!!! :)

[Charles]

Nice work... good expression of how one's soulmate can affect an entire life. A deviation from a lot of your work (same stress on meter and rhyme, but completey different punctuation scheme (like none). Everything is so perfectly put in its place that I keep looking back at Purgatories, wondering about the capital and the plural... with study maybe understanding will come. I'm not crazy about 'lost soul fallen' in the first line, but it is what it is. Good work, friend.

[Star Wolf]

Nice and brilliant, full of emotions, I think a touch of sadness perhaps.

[The Analog Kid]

"Now my pains have no place to play/and nothing left for them to do." Love that line Tate. Great as usual.

[Tina Kline]

You're words here have captured a lot of emotion.
Well done.

[Rogelio Chavez]

This was really good. Very deep full of emotions. Like the music although it was a bit distracting.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here. So touching and so full of emotion.

[Alicante lullaby]

great,...good to see that pains now,dont have any place to play...may they never have...prayers topretty couple..