we had it made didn't we Tate! our generation (i fear) was the last to find the innocence shared in our growing up ... when stealing apples from a neighbors tree was a worse of crimes ... sneaking a smoke behind the barn or a beer out in the thicket ... golden times when guys settled things after school with fists and that was that..when it ended (usually less than 5 min.) it was over and we all walked away friends ... how i also wish those kinds of memories for my grandchildren now ..thank the good Lord my children made it to adulthood and are contributing to life ... but they have their own memories i am not privy to ;) wonderful poem as always...full of wisdom, rhyme and rhythm!
E.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Gene. Yes how true every word every word. Life had both value and meaning. We are a produc.. read moreThank you Gene. Yes how true every word every word. Life had both value and meaning. We are a product of where we came from. I wad proud to be American then not so much now
6 Years Ago
sadly ...i know :( our days now are tumultuous to say the least ..but i think we will work it out .... read moresadly ...i know :( our days now are tumultuous to say the least ..but i think we will work it out ... its just difficult to accept the changing scenes ... and kind of scary too ... love ya bro! ;)
Love it Tate, it makes me think as a parent that how we impact our children, that becomes their memories, things they remember for a life time and refer back to at times. Makes me want to make sure that I create the right kind of memories so when recalled, it brings peace and comfort for years to come.
You've often explored these themes, from what I've read of you. The difference this time is that you describe your own childhood, and proceed to give an analogy with your son's. I believe that is what makes this poem stand on its own feet. This is a beautiful write, one that I believe can only come from the heart of a caring parent. Great job.
Yay Midwest! I'm a Minnesota girl, born and raised, but my parents are both from the Midwest. Anyway, it's a good poem with a nice flow. I don't think I have to tell you to keep writing, because I know you will!
If a parent can give a child the true love of life and what it means, both living it and thriving in his dreams, that boy or girl has everything. Liberty without appreciation and a spirit without laughter means living in a shadow.
Your poem is beautiful .. I don't doubt your son will grow into a super young man, unique, confident and gently proud of his ancestry.
Steady as she goes, mate, on that ship of paternity. The best thing for a boy is firm friendly simplicity, the stable embrace that best supports his adventure of discovery, inner and outer.
Your poem emanates that clarity, and that's a great underrated attribute.
A very loving poem, most of your poems that i've read shows how much you love your children, and this is no exception... Thanks for entering the contest...
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