Love

May the Lord Bless you and Keep you all the days of your life.

Becky

If size were what life were about

then we would not matter a bit

Not to the thoughts that man can dream

nor all the sins he could commit

Our mind is what gives us value

sensitive beyond it's design

Compassion and love will endure

in both your children and in mine

This little blue planet of life

the only home that we know of

Holds us in it's loving embrace

as here was born every love

No matter what life can collect

nor how long life grants you in time

Why would it matter to the earth

or to the heights of mountains you climb

Humanity won't remember 

the man who commanded his friends

Only he who gives hope and love

so that life on earth never ends

Author's Note

Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe? Love is the only trait that is worth remembering because it is meant to be given away selflessly. The recipient is as happy to receive it as you were to give it!

Reviews

[Leigh]

Hi Tate,

If all your neutrons were connected together and engaged at the same time they would be able to create a thought sequence far greater than the size of any universe known to humankind. Your deep thinking mind has stirred the pot and may well bring many others into action and this in itself may start a chain reaction.

Your poetry is a catalyst for other poets and I am always interested in what you have to say

Leigh

[Tate Morgan]

Leigh I am extremely humbled by your thoughts. Thank you so much I hope you have a great Christmas

[Emunah June.]

I love this! What a great way to kick off the new year!

[Sweets]

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! :D
This poem was so lovely
"Our mind is what gives us value
complex beyond any design
Compassion and love will endure
in our children both yours and mine"
Those are wonderful lines that should be recorded throughout history (:
It's such a warm and a loving poem :)
Great job on this!

[MiidniightSoul]

Such a beautiful and heartwarming poem. Lovely, deep and very well written. It was a brilliant piece, thank you for sharing and Merry Christmas to you and your family :)

[Michael X]

I caught this amazing poem, hot off the Twitter press, and am glad I did, what amazing insight and
powerful knowledge into life in general, brilliantly done Tate :)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

You are very kind-- and I could feel your warmth in your words alone--bless you and your family :)

[Adam :P]

wow. makes you think.
amazing bye the way.

[msharma]

Love is a universal truth, it teaches all the human values.Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

[Kaylor Mason]

This is a really beautiful poem. Merry Christmas!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Awwwww! thats all I have to say.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Your stuff is always deep in thought and this one left me thinking.
Excellent write.