HELP

HELP

A Poem by armin
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Just want to say help others and needy one's.

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A poor fellow wearing torn clothes,
begging to earn his survival.
An old man crosses busy road,
with support of a wooden stick.
A broken heart feeling emptiness,
cheated by a fake love.
A kind child fails exams,
lock himself in his room.

What they need is a ray of hope,
light of your eyes.
What they need is your smile,
spread joy in sad times.
What they want is your help,
someone to lighten from inside.
What they need is your hand,
standup tall and wide.

It's ....
It's for the sake of humanity cause,
return back to the great Lord.
Troubled people stories heartfelt
help them, show them the path to right gate.


© 2015 armin


Author's Note

armin
Someone has said, Help is the best way to giving back to God, really true.

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This is very good, needs some editing grammer wise, but message wise, it's gold.
Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


not a religious man me....but that does not mean I do not believe in compassion...The human race holds it's own destiny but needs to be TOGETHER....anger and hate are unwelcome brothers TOGETHER we can overcome them

Posted 3 Years Ago


It's a good idea, it's only a shame people don't help others as much as they should. Thank you for sharing these words, Armin. :) Rudi

Posted 3 Years Ago


need more people like you around in this world. what a difference that would make

Posted 3 Years Ago


wow amazingly written keep it up!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Humanity comes alive when we live for others and serve. We realize how we are different from all other species. Great piece armin. liked how you percieve the concept.

Posted 4 Years Ago


yeah we all need help, i believe that everyone have his own untold story and this story is killing him.. we must be nice to each other and thats the least help we can make to each other.
That was well written :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


armin

4 Years Ago

Thankyou Suhad will look forward to read your writings too. Thankyou.
Very touching words of wisdom ...

Posted 4 Years Ago


armin

4 Years Ago

Thanks Marvin sir.
Excellent story in poetic The thought is pure and true. Great job!--Levi

Posted 4 Years Ago


armin

4 Years Ago

Thanks, levi for your kind visit.
Levi Levin

4 Years Ago

Your welcome friend.
I have to agree with you. Some of the nicest things done are what we do for others. Nice idea for this write. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


armin

4 Years Ago

Great thought, thanks.

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Added on January 5, 2015
Last Updated on October 7, 2015
Tags: Poor, torn, man, stories, help, lord, gate

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armin
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New Delhi, Delhi, India



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