First time

! A poem about first love !

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Street shops were shut down,
we were alone in a place miles away.
A walk under starful sky,
didn't had so much to say.
I knelt down to greet her,
asked for her hand.
I let my eyes linger,
a dance of romance.
The night was like a dream,
I would never forget.
I was in my best suit,
she was in pretty red.
We danced cheek to cheek,
lost in eyes forgetting the world.
That for the first time I experienced heaven,
first time I felt something like love.

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Author's Note

Hope you like it.

Reviews

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those first moments of discovering love are nearly indescribable, but you do it so well, Armin...this takes me back to my first love...well-done

[armin]

Thank you FT, i appreciate the comment.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful, little poem about the first time you experienced love.
What a great moment to write about.
Touching and heartfelt.
I enjoyed the read :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think we do touch heaven with that first love...i know i did...time and space caused that touch to linger only a couple years...but it gives me good memories.

i like this piece.

[armin]

Jacob it's always great to hear from you. Thanks.

[jo]

Beautiful, passionate and just great.
Jo

[armin]

Thankyou, I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Roshan Nair]

It plays out like a video, this work of yours. Great use of words to represent emotions and settings.
Good job armin

[armin]

Thanks for your visit man, I appreciate your read.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A dramatic piece that screams with imagery, well done, good read.

[armin]

Thankyou. ...

[Deepika]

Lovely write..your words have the power to create the live scenes.

[armin]

Thanks for your visit dear.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic, I hope you get or got to really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.

[armin]

Thank you for your read.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful ans blissful and soooo romantic. Loved it :)

[armin]

Thanks Ana B for your lovely visit.

[Matching Socks]

Dancing cheek to cheek, that's so romantic armin. :)
Firsts are always very special.

[armin]

Thank you Ana.