Abused (Stars)

Abused (Stars)

A Poem by Amila Jay
"

for movie stars and artists

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Yesterday I was new

A fresh piece of cake

And all opportunities

Opened up for me

Today I am old

Tattle tales and who I’ve dated

All goes under your nose

Paparazzi like stray dogs

Now I am a done factor

A written note

Stuck to your brains

Fame’s the fortune

But now I am not

So you will find me

With a drug overdose

 

© 2011 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
lemme know your views, thanks:)
lately i have checked out that most stars in the media; singers, actors, actresses, die of drugs at a very young age while some attempt suicide when they can't take their field anymore, this poem is for them.

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Very interesting topic and well-written. I suggest you look up an urban legend called the "27 Club" (or is it Club 27?) Anyway, it gives a long list of musicians who have died at the age of 27, including Kurt Cobain and most recently, Amy Winehouse.
I very much like your poetry. Keep writing please! :-)

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Powerful write, sad when people do this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Stars enjoy all aspects of their life in a short span of time. Their art is an medium and they bring it to the superior extent. Death is the only thing left which they haven't seen in their lifetime. Prone to drugs or other hazardous addictions make them go out of their minds and they feel as if they are free flowing for a short time and later again they are eager for the dose. This kills! Wise stars are smart enough while others are quite weak they just blindly flow with the flow! Take care! Thanks for sharing a beautiful and factual poem! Love and Light!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hey... this one is cool :),,, amazin write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hard to maintain beauty and to be popular. I believe the good life can lead you to a bad place. When there is nothing to excite your soul. Maybe death is what the stars can only see. Your poem told a true story. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on October 8, 2011
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Tags: life, teen, young adult

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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