So emotional, and thoughtful, I can't help but admire the intensity with which you wrote this poem. Every word has been beautifully written, and seems like it has been hand-picked, chosen carefully, and this shows exactly the fragility of the heart, and how we bleed love and suffer from ignorance as it goes "Falling amongst the sound of your words that pours as tears down my cheeks". This is so beautifully written, I really enjoyed. However, heartbreak is just a phase of life, we all get over it, and eventually, life mends it. :)
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Well written good poem, what I especially like is breaking up the lines so that just one word hangs over for the the new line, so it has clever emjambment, as well as a very vivid last line, a hammer metaphor.Well done.
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