The Best of You

How can you smile at her and not at me.

And go to places with her where I want to be.

I've been kept out, ignored, and left behind.

Watched you two have fun too many times.

Couldn't you see that was me who was crying.

Pretending to be happy when inside I was dying.

Now there is nothing you can possibly do.

It broke my heart she go the best of you.

Reviews

[Dominik D. Rites]

"It broke my heart she go the best of you" - did you mean, "It broke my heart when she got the best of you?"

[KAJ]

I didn't think it was necessary, with or without "when", I believe the message is obvious. Thank you for reading it

[Dominik D. Rites]

I was mostly focusing on the "go" vs "got" part. Just a spelling error (: but I see why you wouldn't exactly need to include the "when."

[KAJ]

Oh my bad, yes, should be got thank you

[emipoemi]

Ouch! Short and profound! Brava! Much enjoyed.

[KAJ]

Thank you for reading it and your comment

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[McEltic]

Not an easy place to be, for sure... nicely expressed

[KAJ]

Thank you so much