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Ocean

Ocean

A Poem by Luna
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Wrote this for english

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From rolling waves massaging the sand
To raging storms, tossing and turning 
The bipolar soul of the dark waters.
The cloudy blue-green water lies still,
Not a crease on the surface
Until the lightning crashes and clouds burst,
Letting out the rage of the sky
And awakening the beast in the ocean.

© 2010 Luna


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I really like the imagery here but wished it had more verses.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


I have read a lot of your stuff but this is by far by favorite.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A tender and observant piece richly full of life and incredibly beautiful imagery. Very well written. A pleasure to read. Your English tutor must be proud? "From rolling waves massaging the sand To raging storms, tossing and turning The bipolar soul of the dark waters." That's a masterful and beautiful opening to a poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Imagery pops out all over this page- washing it up. Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A great write. It has great description which is important in poetry and you paint a picture for the reader. The image is a great painting. Going from calm to storms was a great example of transition which again is hard in poetry. In a nut shell it's a great write. Good Job. ㋡

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery and detail. I loved the line:
"The bipolar soul of the dark waters"
Great piece. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very nice:)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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