God's Sacrifice

This is a poem about modern life teenage sacrifices done all around the world. Please support you children and don't let them to become prisoners of all negative emotions that they feel around you.

I am a prisoner of my emotions

and I can loose all the devotion

It is just a matter of time

Until I don't have even a dime

 

Forget about all material things

forget about all sad emotions

Just have a several drinks

but don't forget to drink with caution

 

Sometimes you think that you're dead

sometimes you feel that you're alive

Please believe in what I said

Please just live you own life

 

Your destiny awaits your soul

your whole body is shaking

Just don't loose your control

or your life would be taken

 

We now take you body for a sacrifice

you will is now bound and broken

Your soul was taken by a surprise

your body is now god's token

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I don't really think that everyone is a sacrifice because not all people die for the same reason. I liked the message though. I want people to be able to live for long periods of time as well. I don't like seeing little children die either. Thanks for sharing. :)

[deeps]

WOW! Now this one is simply stunning and so wonderful.
I like the feelings that came ove rmy heart with this write.
Well written and such lovely Flow.

[yo]

Hey Artist,

I really enjoyed the message you're conveying here. Positivity is necessary in this horrible world we live in, but God has conquered it, we just need to hold on and know He is in control. Thanks for sharing!

Gus O.