Does she?

10/25/13

 

 

 

I heard you're dating someone

a girl just caught your eye

Tell me about this new love

the cause of your "Goodbye".

 

Does she greet you good morning

with breakfast in your bed?

Does she know your fav'rite songs

and sing them in her head?

 

Does she kiss you 'til you're breathless

and treat you like a prince?

Does she keep all your love letters,

not throwing them in bins?

 

Does she sing in the shower

and waltz on the floor?

Does she fix your black necktie

and wave bye from the door?

 

Does she pack up your lunch

a sandwich with a note?

Does she send you thoughtful texts

an "I love you" and a quote?

 

Does she understand your hobbies

the cigars and the games?

Does she also love your friends

the quirks behind the names?

 

Does she miss you when you're gone

and wait 'til you're back?

Does she offer better things

all the things that I lack?

 

Does she love you like I did

or does she love you even more?

And baby, does she even know

she has all I'm wishing for?

 

 

Author's Note

I missed rhymes. :)

Reviews

[Poe Redd]

Well the rhyming is seamless :) It's a beautiful poem with a great ending! I think I'll go write a rhyming poem now..

[Blue]

Thank you!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sorry `bout the crowd of men gathered at your door.
So sad `bout those phone calls that keep waking you.
There must be a great guy trying to get you this very minute
and I envy him
cause you are a writer---- a great one.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haha, sorry to disappoint you but no... There has never been a crowd of men and phone calls and a great guy trying to get me. Hahahaha. Really? You give heartwarming reviews. :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

Thanks for the great response-----appreciated, a lot.
---- jEagle

[costa siwale]

Simple and sensual..'Does she know that I love this poem'. LoL

[Blue]

Thank you!

[FlatLineBeauty]

Amazing Blue. Brought back a few feelings and sad memories, but it was beautifully written. xo Winter

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[Antoñyo]

"Y'mean they still make women like that?" 8-o < gasp!> Who said that?

Excellent poem with such emotion held in check only by elegance.

Thanks for the share

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahaha, Antonyo. Thank you. :)

[Anto&ntilde;yo]

You're welcome ;-)

[Cassie]

This is amazingly beautiful, keep writing

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[zaneybear]

the amount that people can relate to this is just wonderful

[Blue]

Thank you!

[lovergirl]

waw , if this is based on real story i swear that i have tears in my eye , so much touching poem you're killin it girl seriously waw , and he is stupid if he doesn't notice what he lost and i wish you find someone better than him loves you in the same way you're loving this boy ;)

[Blue]

Thank you!

[Vani Jalagar]

Ahh........it is very hard to see our love being with someone else.
good one again:)

[Blue]

Thank you!

[L4rn13]

We feel like this from time to time as the situation that arises is very common. Thank you for sharing a very deep write.

[Blue]

Thank you!