Her

Her

A Poem by Ashley
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revolving around not a physical touch but what one can present to a heart

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Her beauty is in more than what the eye can see,
Her beauty is raw,
Her beauty is more than make up on her cheeks,
Her beauty is real, so yes, it does have flaws,
but out of all her beauty is one not seen much,
her beauty is something so rare that it delivers your heart a fond touch, 
her beauty is in that touch.

© 2017 Ashley


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Very good read! Every word picked so carefully! I love the message it sends across!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great promise here
the way I see it you over express, it needs honing just a touch
Take out WHAT in line one
on line 4 so yes it does have flaws could be more direct....but not without flaw...you don't need the plural.....Just a thought


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ashley
Ashley

Merritt Island, FL



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