Death?

We haven't spoke since last Christmas.

If I died tonight

Would you cry tonight

Would you feel a thing

Would you numb like Novocaine 

Would you be in agony

Complete insanity

Would you cry and cry

Would you want to die

If you died tonight

I would cry tonight

I would feel many things

I would numb like Novocaine

I would be in agony 

It'd be complete insanity

I would constantly cry

I would want to die

Because neither of us got to say goodbye.

Reviews

[Anthony]

I liked it, good read. Relationships of any kind seem to hold so much power over us.

[ashleymarie]

Yeah...especially when it's a not present mother. c:

[Warren Daniel II]

This poem immediately felt like a personal piece from the very first line. I like how you wrote the poem through both views of the reader and yourself. A very good read.

[ashleymarie]

Thank you! I'm glad you took the time to read and review!

[ashleymarie]

Wasn't quite sure about this one...