L.O.V.E

Fake.

Living in a dream

         Things aren't as they seem

Out of my hands

         So do I sit, or do I stand?

Vapid living

         There is nothing to be giving

Enough is enough

          What the hell is love?

Reviews

[Raheem Lyttle Kiyaga]

young age, mature master piece

[ashleymarie]

Thank you!

[child of God]

Beautiful poem thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read

[ashleymarie]

Well thank you for reviewing it!

[Not here]

Hey really good acrostic poem :) It was fun to read. I loved the ending. That's kind of ironic since it was saying what is love really....anyways good job!

[ashleymarie]

Thanks, I appreciate it!

[Not here]

Yeah no problemo

[Zoltan]

Nice one :P
I like that you are playing with the form and shape as well.

[ashleymarie]

Thank you!!
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