i'm sorry...

i'm sorry...

A Poem by ashlyn vik

i remember the way you use to hold me. but now these days i only feel lonley.

they say love can get you through all things tough, sadly this time love just isnt enough.

you and i, we grew apart. now i dont want to be with you and its breaking my heart.

 

i remember we use to be the same. but now its like we're just pawns in a hopeless game. there's nothing between us, if you can clearly see. it seems that we've lost every ounce of our chemistry.

 

I love you, but this time it's not enough. our relationship has seem to run out of luck        

© 2012 ashlyn vik


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What a wonderful piece. I found myself humming each word because of how beautifully each word flowed. The message is one you hear a lot, but the way you presented it made it your own. Wonderful job!
I loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 13, 2012
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ashlyn vik
ashlyn vik

fouke, AR



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I'm a person just like everyone else. I have feelings and I make mistakes. I don't pretend to be someone I'm not... I'm me. If you talk to me, I'll talk back. Im kind if you're kind. I am mean if you .. more..

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A Poem by ashlyn vik