UNCONDITIONAL LOVE

UNCONDITIONAL LOVE

A Poem by Asra Hakak
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you were my biggest treasure that I have lost ..... an irreparable loss I would say!

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you knew what I was about to say before the words came out
you knew I was hurt even when I screamed and shout
you understood me when I misunderstood my self
you loved me wrapped in rags or wrapped in wealth
you always reminded me who I was when anger took control
you stayed even when I pushed you away with all my might
you held me close on my darkest, loneliest nights
you were my strength when I was weak
you were my brave voice when I couldn't speak
your heart beated for me when mine was breaking
you held my hand when pain pushed my body to aching
my friend you were
'' UNCONDITIONAL LOVE'

© 2015 Asra Hakak


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I like it, and it was smooth to read and beautiful to feel .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

8 Years Ago

glad to know that you liked it... tysm for the read and the review
really awesome how u explained it..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

8 Years Ago

tysm for the read and review
this is certainly a beautiful way of saying how love has invaded your total person. And I guess
it is unconditional if it hurts when it's there and hurts when it's not there. Beautifully expressed
my friend.....dana

Posted 8 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

8 Years Ago

tysm dana ^_^
This is too good Asra. Adding to my favorites. ♥

Posted 8 Years Ago


Asra Hakak

8 Years Ago

that really means a lot
tysvm musadiq
glad to know that you liked it

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Asra Hakak
Asra Hakak

India



About
Thoughts are rare to come and pressures of life make less what one knows but notes help to remember and reflect.I write down my thoughts, thoughts that have no name given,I write down dreams and night.. more..

Writing
TELL ME TELL ME

A Poem by Asra Hakak