The Times We Were Lying in a Bed

The times we were lying in a bed being naked
Enjoying the morning, we have just wakened
And I remember that I didn't want to let you go
But you had to and your answer was "no"

Now I don't even know how many years have passed
I'm walking down the streets thinking about you and our past
It was so long ago, I can surely say
And I haven't yet realized how much did I need to pay

Your smile still shines like sun in my head
I know it was my problem, I didn't properly behaved
You hated me, and I did as well
But still our love grew day by day, I shall tell

This is how I understand what feelings are
Being depressed, or being happy, I went too far
You know I've never wanted to make you sad
It was just my character, that was not correctly set

I didn't want to lose you, but I did
And since that moment I was not as happy as I seemed
The times we were lying in a bed being naked
I still remember, but by you they are hated.

Reviews

[Gee]

Lost love,regrets......think most have been there,nicely done

[daninstockholm]

Anastasija, am I correct that english is not your first language? I only ask because there were a couple of times where you tripped just a little, but that didn't detract at all from the poem, (I'll be happy to tell you which parts if you wish, we're all here to help each other become better poets) Be that as it may, a very good write, good images and flow.. i've been in this type of situation before and it's never fun.. I can definitely relate to this!

[svarevska.anastasija]

Yes, you are right, it is my second language!
I would be very thankful for your help! :)

[terry smith]

Sometimes you don't know what you have till it's gone...so sad.Well written poem! :)

[svarevska.anastasija]

That was the message of my poem. Thank you!

[wordman]

i`m sure he has fond memories as well,reminds me of my poem winds of time.great write

[svarevska.anastasija]

Thank you!
Will definitely read your poem!