One Last Time

When you're really tired of fighting with someone,but still nobody lets go just 'cuz you want them in your life real bad!

I'm so sick of fighting,

Now,It's starting to bring me down!

And when i see you 'typing..'

I hope,with a frown,

that you might send your apologies..

But,All I see is more stubborn words,

And we start fighting again!

Both of us, now so sore with pain,

For a while now,

Things have been low,

And 'high' is just another word,

A word that gives us hope!

We both try to cope,

It's like we're tied together with a rope!

Nobody leaves,Maybe,

That's how it's supposed to be..

Sometime,We don't talk for days,

Sometimes,my heartbeats, they rise..

"Miss You",is something i wanna say,

But,my ego,it won't let me say!

At last, you come up to me,

And ask if we could try one last time...

And then,I remember,

The last time when you said the same!

But still I say,"One last time it is"...
Hoping..Still hoping!..
I don't wanna let you go..I really don't!.. 

Author's Note

I had to post this.. Would love to read your reviews and suggestions..
I wrote this today,And what made me write this are all the frequent fights with my best friend! Hope all would turn out better! :)

It's been a busy week! I know i'm really behind on the reviews..Will read all your works this weekend! :) Please do send the read requests so that i don't miss any! :)

Reviews

[TheMalady]

Oh, I thought this was a fight between you and your gf. haha, sorry. However, I like the words here and as well as the story in the poem. It's true that the last words are not always the last and it leaves us frustrated. Though, I must say that both must have understanding and enough faith to each other. Whatever must happen, friendship is more important than pride.

Nothing I could say bad against this. Good job! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Glad that you liked it! Thank you so much! :)

[TheMalady]

You're very welcome! :)

[vellichor]

Very relatable. Love it! Hope to see more! (:

[Emily]

I love it!
Very well written!
Keep it up!!

[Greg Agee]

I like this one a lot. You express your anger very well. Albeit the frustration of love. Goid stuff! I too wonder if the friends and confession are related. Beahtiful work

[Tiffany K Charles]

a best friend is just like a a spouse....... you fight for them to be a good person and even a better friend to you and sometimes..... they get it or they don't........ but love is love ...... and I love love....... good job...

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes you can't tick all the right boxes and the one that doesn't get ticked is the one needed the most to make it work. Its about pushing the right buttons and being flexible, the ole give and take!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks for your time :)

[Willard Wells]

Some of our greatest loves in life are with someone with cannot live with. The passion is strong, but the anger is greater. Nicely done.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much! :)

[idiotproof--1]

great poem. at one point you say "we both, so sore with pain" I think you may have meant "we're both" or "both of us" otherwise a good read thanks for sharing.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks.. Fixed that ;) Thanks for pointing it out! :)

[ExquisiteEyes]

A poem that shows the conflict of ego in a fight. It can destroy even the strongest of bonds.
As for the poem, I think its wonderful.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

[Chuck]

Praise brother! I dig this one so much I'm finding treasure. I'm kinda pissed actually - you beat me to this theme. Sorry no critiques on this one - really tight piece.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much! :)