Chase your desire...

 

Why do you let fear grip you

Like a hungry python?

Why do you let hesitation seize you

Like a chasing storm

 

Why do you fear to stand

In spite of having two legs?

Why do you think to abnegate

In spite of being adept?

 

Why do you let it slip from your brain

That sacrifice will help you gain

Each price of your pain.

 

Feel your blood.

They are still flowing through your veins…

Listen to your heart beat,

It is still knocking at your ribs….

 

Then why can’t you break this bondage?

Why don’t you show your courage?

 

Run, run…..and chase your desire

Make your will as strong as a fire..

 

So bleed, bleed.

But never weep.

And never dare to forfeit….

 

So try, try

Until you reach your sky.

But never dare to cry..

Spread your hope .

Take up a flight

Engulf the ocean of fear…

And you’ll see your destination is so near…..

 

Author's Note

i know it's not good...but i just wrote it.any amendment in it is welcome

Reviews

[Cynthia Man]

I think it's great! I agree with your poem, we've to chase for what we believe, or we will regret for our whole life. We should take action to get what we want. Also, I love the flow of your poem as well!
Nice written :D:D

[The dark story]

aw.thanks for your kind compliments.....i'm glad that you liked it!!!!

[khalid]

it is really nicely written with so much will to survive and face whatever we meet..

[The dark story]

wow.so glad to hear from you ......i'm so glad you liked my work.......

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wonderfully inspirational. Leaves the reader with the feeling that they can overcome any obstacle. Excellent!

[The dark story]

thanks a tonne for your kind reviews......i'm so glad that you liked it!!!

[Brandon Mathis]

i love this poem there is a great intelligence about it

[The dark story]

thanks a lot :)

[Brandon Mathis]

no problem

[TL Boehm]

Why do you let hesitation seize you
Like a chasing storm

amen. We are so often paralyzed by our indecision and our fear. Nicely penned

[The dark story]

wwwwow.i am really glad that you like it.thank you so much:D

[Irvette Dauphine]

wow.. i like it..
this is amazing poem.. :D

[The dark story]

thank you so much.i am really glad you like it

[An owl on the moon]

Too often we go through life and never ask the questions... never look inside... Your amazing poem not only gently forces us to wonder about the why, but it drives us to rise above the fears to fly...

[The dark story]

i heartily thank you for your kind reviews

[eighwoeifj]

Such motivational words. I love when people write things like that instead of the depressing works that are becoming more and more popular.
You do have to believe in yourself more though, because it isn't bad. I liked it!

[The dark story]

thank you so much for liking it..

[Renée]

Hope !

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Atiba you need to have much more confidence in yourself, the poem is good well I should its great.. such a motivational poem... remember from next time you should never lack confidence cause you are a good writer and you need to know that!

[The dark story]

i am sorry:(.but that's so nice of you brother.i am really glad you like it......

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

surely, since you are my sister you need to have much much confidence in you!! :)